tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post8774651875646848260..comments2024-03-26T05:13:45.451-04:00Comments on The romantic query letter and the happy-ever-after: An Excerpt From What Is To Be David and Margaret's StoryThe romantic query letter and the happy-ever-afterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13382165250238920938noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-58810236034537890642020-02-27T21:14:15.505-05:002020-02-27T21:14:15.505-05:00Being a vampire is not what it seems like. It’s a ...Being a vampire is not what it seems like. It’s a life full of good, and amazing things. We are as human as you are.. It’s not what you are that counts, but how you choose to be. Do you want a life full of interesting things? Do you want to have power and influence over others? To be charming and desirable? To have wealth, health, and longevity? contact the vampires creed today via email: Richvampirekindom@gmail.comJerome Samsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00886505335771600600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-4302496008075853482010-02-24T01:56:23.723-05:002010-02-24T01:56:23.723-05:00My thanks to each of you for stopping by to read m...My thanks to each of you for stopping by to read my musings, I'm as grateful as ever.<br />Oh and Cro the truth is it simply never occurred to me but now you have mentioned it I shall be mindful.<br />Warm regards to you all,<br />SimoneThe romantic query letter and the happy-ever-afterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13382165250238920938noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-8248023900804898382010-02-22T19:15:54.102-05:002010-02-22T19:15:54.102-05:00J'adore Collette and your blog.J'adore Collette and your blog.Leah Marie Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05432159961271108072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-3513029397368186742010-02-22T11:51:52.712-05:002010-02-22T11:51:52.712-05:00What a beautiful picture and beautiful words!
I h...What a beautiful picture and beautiful words! <br />I hope you have enough. I wish you the best of luck!Avalonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08722166722435492840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-44962428185078599462010-02-22T10:03:39.017-05:002010-02-22T10:03:39.017-05:00FWIW, I'm impressed Simone. You truly captured...FWIW, I'm impressed Simone. You truly captured the spirit of the times. Great imagery and believable dialogue. <br /><br />If the story were made into a novel, perhaps you could stretch some of the intrigue out. This way the reader doesn't learn too much about the characters too soon. Keep em guessing until the end. I enjoyed reading your story, it's the bones of a great novel. IMHO, I say go for it, maybe this is "the one"(: <br /><br />All the best.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00501918398545296619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-35673341842687853272010-02-22T00:07:36.647-05:002010-02-22T00:07:36.647-05:00Never hear4d of this fiction before. But I guess i...Never hear4d of this fiction before. But I guess it's worth a read. I'll see if I can get it online!<br /><br />Thanks for sharing, dear friend!Ekanthapadhikanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145892282785596764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-12858131975934416992010-02-21T21:10:37.869-05:002010-02-21T21:10:37.869-05:00this is what im talking about, Dearest Simone.
You...this is what im talking about, Dearest Simone.<br />You've bewitched me.<br /><br />xxooillustration poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05234799027315035658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-84575100847274262032010-02-21T16:53:45.374-05:002010-02-21T16:53:45.374-05:00A wonderful glimpse of coming attractions.A wonderful glimpse of coming attractions.David Cranmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04749857752139212888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-80815305536882119732010-02-21T16:45:19.756-05:002010-02-21T16:45:19.756-05:00What a beautiful read! How do you keep finding the...What a beautiful read! How do you keep finding these stunning images?<br /><br /><i>Danielle</i>Paris Pastryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13171716497471063352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-65460861667085171212010-02-21T05:09:52.198-05:002010-02-21T05:09:52.198-05:00Enchanting writing, Simone! I hope you're well...Enchanting writing, Simone! I hope you're well. :)<br /><br />Corra<br /><br /><a href="http://corramcfeydon.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">from the desk of a writer</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-52775200440440669392010-02-20T18:23:33.237-05:002010-02-20T18:23:33.237-05:00This was so fun to read. I wonder if Margaret wil...This was so fun to read. I wonder if Margaret will carry through with Collette's teachings.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-39404059128737276632010-02-20T16:54:22.001-05:002010-02-20T16:54:22.001-05:00I am spellbound! To think that this world can stil...I am spellbound! To think that this world can still posess some traces of yesterday's treasure through your style of writing... It's simply wonderful, Simone! (^_^)Dear Fireflieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11752902641518139618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-39759407248106449402010-02-20T16:13:39.105-05:002010-02-20T16:13:39.105-05:00Oh, the wiles of women! Simone, you are so so so g...Oh, the wiles of women! Simone, you are so so so good at this. And you don't even need me to say it... you know it. But you are just so good. You are most definitely born to write this style. So keep writing it, and don't rest until you've got your Romantic Query turned into a Romantic Contract! I will be first in line to order your book.<br /><br />NevineNevine Sultanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08794887684860140819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-51925810212654670362010-02-20T14:58:13.227-05:002010-02-20T14:58:13.227-05:00I love it.I love it.Zuzannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02935929667396847820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-53434108922757973172010-02-20T13:44:15.591-05:002010-02-20T13:44:15.591-05:00This is a very entertaining read. The two women in...This is a very entertaining read. The two women in the photo match the topic perfectly. I have never seen a photo like that before you can almost see a conversation like this taking place in the photo.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing.<br /><br />Tom BaileyTom Baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00694425811308686944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-70213062760917625752010-02-20T11:46:56.795-05:002010-02-20T11:46:56.795-05:00Wow, this is spectacular to read. I love the word...Wow, this is spectacular to read. I love the wording and imagery in here.Amy Saiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00346366018143891761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-22234915769714731752010-02-20T11:10:54.506-05:002010-02-20T11:10:54.506-05:00What a beginning! I can't wait for more.What a beginning! I can't wait for more.Valhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16382137851728211157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-4372794784274895592010-02-20T08:32:40.552-05:002010-02-20T08:32:40.552-05:00As always, a pleasure to read your writing. You dr...As always, a pleasure to read your writing. You draw the reader in, place them beside the ladies and involve them in the conversation. Beautifully done.Mason Canyonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10935307400882363560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-36283119807184064692010-02-20T07:41:56.927-05:002010-02-20T07:41:56.927-05:00This was so much fun to read. :) I hope you find e...This was so much fun to read. :) I hope you find enough material to write the whole story.Ineshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12119611878721554991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-84856024564067168322010-02-20T07:25:41.794-05:002010-02-20T07:25:41.794-05:00“As naturally as possible,” Collette said without ...“As naturally as possible,” Collette said without falter. “We pitch your cheek to blush, rub your lips to plump and see you look him directly in the eyes oh also if you could manage erect nipples-”<br /><br />Lol on the last one :) Great oneBlodeueddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03435479623560871881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-20106275531869108662010-02-20T05:41:00.208-05:002010-02-20T05:41:00.208-05:00I meant 'wouldn't' of course.I meant 'wouldn't' of course.Tom Stephensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05979590950587415840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-13619664507829652922010-02-20T05:37:42.491-05:002010-02-20T05:37:42.491-05:00Ah, those were the days, when erect nipples were a...Ah, those were the days, when erect nipples were an important part of the chosen arsenal of female enticement. The current trend amongst 16 to 25 year-olds is to keep them as hidden as possible, with padded underwear. Sadly, my young lady friends would be seen dead with erect nipples.Tom Stephensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05979590950587415840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4658469631060045142.post-865170619626097422010-02-20T02:35:20.789-05:002010-02-20T02:35:20.789-05:00"I simply cannot abide an unsteady female&quo..."I simply cannot abide an unsteady female". What a wonderful notion.<br /><br />Simone; aren't you giving away too many secrets?Cro Magnonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840670227576695352noreply@blogger.com