She says there might be feedback given by their editorial staff that will alter the way I edit/present the rest of my stories. It’s good guidance, I think.
Now, there is a small matter with the title of my stories, a silly oversight on my part really. I’ve always written my stories with a single title – usually it’s the surname or title of the hero – but now I worry for at Undone the titles are more a hook line.
Notorious Lord, Compromised Miss, The Unmasking of Lady Loveless and so on. I wouldn’t even stress the matter had it not been mentioned in an interview Linda Fildew gave on Word Wrench.
Now I’m thinking Huntley: Devout Prince of Pleasure, even if he’s more decent fellow with healthy desires. I’m story boarding a Christmas story, which I’m thinking of calling ‘Albion or the Hedonistic St Nicholas'
I can’t say it without giggling.